Words to Edit By
One of our fundamental principles of writing and editing:
Phrasing ought to be calibrated to communicate your intended meaning effectively to your intended audience of readers.
A Realist Take
Phrasing and word choice are like manners: they’re about being considerate of the other person. Gifted bards aren’t just clever wordsmiths or skilled performers, after all; they know how to read the room. The high-flown language, archaic words, and obscure allusions that resonate in a king’s hall may not play as well in the local tavern. There’s nothing wrong with lower-brow phrasing if that’s what best allows you to connect with your audience.
For Instance
Below is a table of contents for our current and upcoming articles on editing for phrasing. Each of the hyperlinked articles encompasses a big editorial action step or subtopic. Those articles link (or will link), in turn, to additional articles covering smaller steps, specific guidelines, and practical tips. If there’s no link yet, the article is forthcoming.
Tone and written voice
Pronoun point-of-view
Sentence length
Varied sentence type and syntax
Precision and clarity
Potential misreadings
Word choice for genre and content
Word choice for intended readers
Redundant phrasing
Weak phrasing
Godspeed and happy rewriting!
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